Someday

Submitted by paperpoet on Fri, 07/09/2010 - 14:56

 

Someday is one day I wish for Someday is the day of my dreams Someday is one day away, so they say So close, but so far still it seems Someday the day that I pray for Someday, what day will it be? Someday, the one day I need to be okay Someday come one day to me
Author's age when written
17
Genre
Poetry
Tags
life
dreams

Comments

Mairead

Sun, 08/01/2010 - 13:28

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I really like the ring and pointedness of this poem, but it has a distant vagueness about it too which really captures and inspires. :)  intriguing.

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Kassady

Wed, 08/04/2010 - 01:19

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that was AWSOME! love the line

"Someday is the day of my dreams"

That was great very inspiring!

Write on!

 

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

E

Fri, 08/13/2010 - 15:53

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Oh, I really like this, paperpoet.

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond