Finally, it comes
and I can breathe again
even with the world crashing around me
and terror towering above.
Clarity of sky brings clarity of mind - take it away:
the lovely blue sky
fading at the edge
and then the sun, pure pure white
and blazing with all the colors in the universe - let me forget,
let my thoughts fuzz around the edges like bad reception.
I love the brilliance
but right now I am happy to let it rain
with the soft water grazing my cheeks and tickling the roots of my hair.
It's almost done now
the deadly glow pushing against the clouds.
The light is beautiful but please
I beg you
don't stop the rain.
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Lovely. Just lovely.
Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh
This is wonderful :)
This is wonderful :)
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
Breathtaking!
Your wording was really splendid in this poem, I really loved the rolling rhythme it had! Love!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
Thank you all, ladies; I'm
Thank you all, ladies; I'm amazed at how much everyone has loved this. :)
"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya
This is beautiful. The
This is beautiful. The imagery is lovely, and the words are really well arranged - I like it very much. : )