Two questions in the armory

Submitted by Kathleen on Sun, 06/16/2013 - 07:40

Step into the armory
the wizard told me.
I gazed round the room
‘’ What kind would you like?’’
he asked.
‘’ I think I’d like armor
a lot stronger than
the normal sort
the kind that keeps out the dreaming
the hoping
and most importantly the loving
the kind that would give me
a heart as hard as diamonds
a heart, always, always
whole.
He was still for a moment
then he asked me
another question.
He asked me if I wanted to be
like Morgan Le Fay, like Circe
or just dead?

Author's age when written
19
Genre

Comments

I agree with Homey, the underlying messages were perfect. The ending was my favorite. Great job!!

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Wow! That's all I've got to say.
A whole story in just a few lines, makes my brain go "Boom!" LOL!
Very, very, very, very, very, very well done!

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

Wow. Just, wow.

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief