Frigid waves rock like a cradle.
They enfold like a sheet.
The torrents caress stilling limbs.
Her only comfort from life
the roaring swell
that she embraces, sinking deep.
Her fey mind sings its blighted tune.
She opens her arms to rest,
a place apart from violent ends
and strife.
Her dampened brow lies pale.
Lifeless lids do not wake.
She said good-night to the ladies
and bid her last
farewell.
Like a daisy with petals withered
too soon,
Ophelia has lost her
bloom.
Comments
I loved the last four lines
I loved the last four lines the most. Likening her to a flower...
I <3 Hamlet, I really do.
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
Hmm!
I love the feeling this gives the reader! Amazing job!
Write on!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
oooohhhh <3
tragic. *weeps* I like the way you wrote this. It's very moving.