Just something I thought I'd share - my very first poem =)
I come
Home
And there
I find old cat.
Sweet serene loving
old cat always
there just lying
there waiting
for you to get home.
Written exactly as it was all those years ago on a small piece of notebook paper. Not a masterpiece, but I remember being very proud of it at the time.
The funny thing is I didn't actually own and old cat =)
I'll probably wish I hadn't posted this tomorrow.Comments
:)
So cute!!
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"Elves and Dragons! Cabbages and potatoes are better for me and you. Don't go getting mixed up in the business of your betters, or you'll land in trouble too big for you." — Hamfast Gamgee (the Gaffer)
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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]
:)
This is so you - I can totally see you writing this when you were little - you've always had a thing for cats. (Not that I blame you - they're absolutely wonderful creatures!) I like the rhythm of the last few lines - "always there just lying there waiting for you to get home"... it has a good feel. :)
I don't like how in the
I don't like how in the beginning it says 'I come home' and then in the end it says 'waiting for you to get home'. Of course I can't expect seven year old me to have written anything incredibly amazing, so I've tried my best not to critique it too much =)
Definitely cute though, I find it very amusing.
Your Nerdfighting Sista
Oh I can just see little cute Tami dreaming of having her own cat and writing this poem. Oh so precious : )
Awwww.....
Awwww.....So cute. I wrote lots of stories. Once I wrote on called "Shiny the Unicorn" when I was five. It was really cute....
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Adorable!! :) I love it.
Adorable!! :)
I love it. "Serene" is not a word I knew when I was seven, LOL. :)
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Katie Marie
BFF To Katie Sara
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"Because After All, A Person's a Person, no matter how small." -Dr.Seuss
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And they lived happily