Black Inferno Chapter one: the power of all in one

Submitted by Nick on Tue, 01/08/2008 - 19:14

who am i? benamin stalker, oldest in the eighth generation of the notorious and
dangerous stalker family. we, a family devoting our life to the special forces,
now have the highest reputation in the world. and now, even though my five
brothers and teamates have passed on, i fare well in this cruel, unfair world.
very unfair.
there is no easy way to tell you this, so i wont hold back. you see, about a
century ago, earth fell to a savage alien race. dont worry, you still have several
millenia to go, but its coming.and it will be brutal. only 8057 humans from the the
population escaped, only the ones from the most important down that could fit on
the uss parley made it. we were second on the list.
anyways, we relocated 18 lightyears to a planet called Geveron 4. there we
rested, rebuilt, defended and evolved the population. now, here i stand, on the land
of my fathers and forefathers, with the reputation of eight generations of
great men on my shoulders. eight generations of warriors traind to enter an unfammiliar
ship with guards out the wyzoo, land the ship several hours later, and be the only one
to walk out alive.
and that is exatly what i must do.

benjamin stalker
personal mission log
audio only
date: 19,087

" i have been deployed to yet another suicide mission. the mothership of an alien race
called the Saints, holds the VIP astrocosmicist Dr. Jile Drone. captured during off-world study, how the doctor is and where the doctor is is unknown. i do know that he must be very important. Genera Haseguff, my direct supirior, even took me aside yesterday.he said, '' son, i know since your brothers died, you dont take kindly to working with others. you prefer to work alone, and i respect that, because you get your job done well. but this trip, i have been asked to allow several other teams to join you. since they are my supiriors, i had no choice but to accept.i need you to work with your team on this one, ben. those are orders."
so, now i await the breifing that general Haseguff himself has agreed to host. there i will meet the rest of my so called "team". and as i read up on all available Saint
information, i count the miliseconds untill i will see action again.

(end personal mission log, benjamin stalker, 19,087)

benjamin stalker ended the mission log, and sighed deeply.

Author's age when written
13
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Comments

Wate!!! this is the same as the first one... did you mess up on something in the first one you wrote and fixed it? I didn't see anything wrong with it. Still good btw.