Humanity

Submitted by Mairead on Thu, 05/21/2009 - 16:15
Still midnight.
Hushed.--------------------H

The winds soft sigh.
Unsettled.-----------------U

Tear filled eyes.
Mournful.-----------------M

The stars soft light.
Alluring.-------------------A

The wonder why.
Nameless.-----------------N

No more Time.
Irksome.--------------------I

The moons dark side.
Transfixing.---------------T

The child’s cry.
Yearning.------------------Y

Author's age when written
16
Genre

Comments

This was very good! I loved the way you wrote the poem. Great job!

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'As for myself,' said Eomer, 'I have little knowledge of these deep matters; but I need it not. This I know, and it is enough, that as my friend Aragorn succoured me and my people, so I will aid him when he calls, I will go.'

~The Return of the King
The Last Debate

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

I like it. :)
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If I disappear, and you cannot find me, please don't worry.
Just be sure to check all the wardrobes.

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

Lovely job, I really like it.

~Erin~

"Okay, so I'm like the Jonas Brothers' older, evil stepbrother..." -Adam Lambert on Joe Jonas comment

"Perhaps he's that Neevil! Tally-ho! Tantivy! Cut him off! Round him up! Keep it up! Hurrah!" Talking Animals in Magician's Nephew

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Oh, this is lovely. Funny, I just got around to reading it. I normally am not really a big fan of free verse, but this one wasn't exactly a poem anyway so it was alright...what was it...it was a poem, but yet not...I don't know...something.

"I decided to be sensible the other day and tore up David's picture. Could you please send me some Scotch tape?" Audrey Hepburn (Sabrina)