Smile

Submitted by Madeline on Fri, 12/06/2013 - 19:26

Yes, my hands are in the air
Above my head
Closed eyes wide smile

Yes, for now they're in the air
All in my head
Closed mind wide smile

Yes, right now I'm in the air
Around my head
Closed mouth wide smile

Yes, my feet are on the ground
Above the core
Open eyes failing smile

Yes, for now they're on the ground
All in the core
Open mind failing smile

Yes, right now they're on the ground
Around the core
Open mouth no smile

Author's age when written
16
Genre
Poetry
Notes

Just a little something! Wrote it after listening to Say Something covers on YouTube...and you guys should check out "Alex and Sierra Say Something" on YouTube because it's the BEST. Thoughts?

Comments

Kassady

Mon, 12/09/2013 - 22:49

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Love Say Something!!! Good song! And this was definitely an interesting poem, I didn't really understand it, or the repetitiveness. But I liked your word choices!
"Open eyes failing smile" Mmmm!

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