Hope
Intertwined in your life
Beating every beat
Stepping every step
Moving with your feet
A greatly respected thing
Something inevitable
Never able to stop
Things can be regrettable
But this little bundle
This tiny little pack
So small yet big
Clinging to your back
Born in every baby
Crashed in every wave
Stretching across mountains
Light in every cave
It may be hard to hold
For our hands are very small
But our hearts are wide open
Never letting it fall
Then the sun shines
And the heart glows
Forgetting long
Forgotten woes
And that just proves
Many theories so
There is hope
There is something to know.
Comments
Thanks so much!
Thank you so much! I loved your poetry too! It was excellent!
Goood JOB!
I loved it! it was so true! well done!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
I...
I Hope Firefly fairy's chapter one will be published soon!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
Kassady...
Hey Kassady!
I think it just was today!!!! Did we ever get any comments on the prolouge???
Your Friend,
HomeschoolGirl
Very good!
I really enjoyed reading this. I really like the first stanza of the poem! Great language too!
I know!...
I know wasn't this good!
Good job Homey!
Do you think we should post "The Strong Hearts" on here? and on Apricot Tarts?
Love it!
Write on!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
Hmmm....
I don't know...it's just forty pages, you know? Maybe excerpts from it? That would be cool, though. Especially if we posted it scene by scene. I'll talk to you soon, Kassady! :))
Thank you both! :D
Thank you Kassady and Alexandra!
I loved this poem,
I loved this poem, particularly these stanzas:
Intertwined in your life
Beating every beat
Stepping every step
Moving with your feet
Born in every baby
Crashed in every wave
Stretching across mountains
Light in every cave
Thank you so much for posting this.