Jittery
Anxious
Heart beating
Flowing
Stop
Excited
Strange
Emotionless
Except for the one
that rules all
Stop
And shaking
Shaking
Shaking
Shaking
Till the heart
Is fullfilled
Stop
And then the world
shakes along
With you
And you know
You are not alone
Stop
And even when
you cannot stop
for anything, you must continue
you will not halt
till the heart is once again
satisfied
stop
and you
overall
may seem
annoying
or rude
or unable
to do things
but really
you just
are
excited
and then...you
STOP
*may seem strange! just wrote this--it is supossed to give you the feeling of a jittery person. the words jump around and then there is a (random) stop at the end of every stanza to keep the rhythm of this poem
Let me know what you think!
I like it!
I like everything you write!
And then the world
shakes along
With you
And you know
You are not alone
I like that part!
thanks for reading !friendship!
Write on!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!