Excited

Submitted by Madeline on Thu, 06/03/2010 - 16:02

 Jittery

Anxious

Heart beating

Flowing 

Stop

 

Excited

Strange

Emotionless

Except for the one 

that rules all

Stop

 

And shaking

Shaking 

Shaking 

Shaking

Till the heart

Is fullfilled

Stop

 

And then the world

shakes along

With you

And you know

You are not alone

Stop

 

And even when

you cannot stop

for anything, you must continue

you will not halt

till the heart is once again

satisfied

stop

 

and you

overall

may seem

annoying

or rude

or unable

to do things

but really

you just

are 

excited

and then...you 

STOP

 

*may seem strange! just wrote this--it is supossed to give you the feeling of a jittery person. the words jump around and then there is a (random) stop at the end of every stanza to keep the rhythm of this poem

Let me know what you think!

Author's age when written
12
Genre

Comments

I like everything you write!

And then the world

shakes along

With you

And you know

You are not alone

 

I like that part!

thanks for reading !friendship!

 

Write on!

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