Life's Portrait

Submitted by Kay J Fields on Fri, 04/01/2011 - 21:13

 

What does life look like? Who’s to say how it appears? Is it the bud of a rose flower? Or the electric lighting strike? It may be the trees Which sway in the wind Or the wind itself Giving breath to the breeze It’s the laugh of a child It’s the tears that grief Marks on our faces It’s the sorrows, the boundings The fallings, the justice, the graces It’s the leaf as it crushes beneath a boot It’s the mighty blue mountain Whose stone is as a deep root How do you paint life in a portrait? Or make one understand That it’s not in the riches However they may be grand And it’s not in the blood That flows through these veins Nor the pulsing heart in each chest But simply a miracle of all ages Whose meaning one might never guess Until you look but deeper inside At the Hand which chisels the changes The One who made life So how would one sketch this? Or dare to say? Is life a flower, the sky The ant or a bird? There’s only one answer I’ve been able to find And that is that life is infinite A universe And yet it all came From a word.  
Author's age when written
15
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Comments

Well done, Kay J. I liked this. I liked it a lot. It felt like a quiet time, a time just spent musing, following a unified stream of thought without a lot of frustrating intensity, and yet still pushing for the answer. The ending leaves us feeling somewhat unresolved, but in this case I think that's a good thing.

Good job!

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Brother: Your character should drive a motorcycle.
Me: He can't. He's in the wilderness.
Brother: Then make it a four-wheel-drive motorcycle!

How do you paint life in a portrait?
Or make one understand
That it’s not in the riches
However they may be grand
And it’s not in the blood
That flows through these veins
Nor the pulsing heart in each chest
...

Favorite stanza, there.

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief