I don't usually write free verse poetry, but I really liked how this one turned out.
The ink curls around itself Twisting in curlicues and Straightening in lines It weaves a delicate spider web As the pen ticks across the parchment The individual fibers of the web Glisten in the sun They join Circle Twist and form The web shines brightly The ink stitches a story as it spills onto the page Looping and riding On the tossing ocean of the mind As imagination becomes solid The vapors settle They relax The pen scratches dry Is filled And begins again Weaving Twisting Creating The strokes transform into letters The letters form words And together Words become tales Poems Ballads Myths Stories and songs Then they fall before the reader’s eye Open to them Like an ear to a whispered secret The reader breathes in the words Remembers the story Drinks in the poetry The pen At rest Is nearly forgotten As the words are repeated again and again But it all started with A single line A single drop of inkComments
Hmmm...This must be poetry week :D
I really like this, Kay J. It was very pretty and descriptive. I think my favorite lines were these:
The pen
At rest
Is nearly forgotten
As the words are repeated again and again
But it all started with
A single line
A single drop of ink.
Keep up the excellent work :)
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wonderful
I feel the same way about ink. Last night I was trying to write a sentence, paused to find the word I was looking for, and before I knew it was doodling all sorts of swirls in the margins from the letter B.
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
Interesting :) I like it!
Interesting :) I like it!
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
I love this!
I love this! I'm always a sucker for such lovely descriptions. It makes me want to break out my dip pens and ink bottles.
Beautiful!
Very... Descriptive! Very well done! And I really liked the begining! The circles joining! Loved that!
Very pretty!
Write on!
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Write On!
I liked this.
I like this. It was very descriptive...which I loved. Oh, and this line stuck out:
The ink stitches a story as it spills onto the page
I can just picture it! Lovely work! :)