Step into the armory
the wizard told me.
I gazed round the room
‘’ What kind would you like?’’
he asked.
‘’ I think I’d like armor
a lot stronger than
the normal sort
the kind that keeps out the dreaming
the hoping
and most importantly the loving
the kind that would give me
a heart as hard as diamonds
a heart, always, always
whole.
He was still for a moment
then he asked me
another question.
He asked me if I wanted to be
like Morgan Le Fay, like Circe
or just dead?
Comments
I agree with Homey, the
I agree with Homey, the underlying messages were perfect. The ending was my favorite. Great job!!
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
Ditto!
Wow! That's all I've got to say.
A whole story in just a few lines, makes my brain go "Boom!" LOL!
Very, very, very, very, very, very well done!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
Wow. Just, wow.
Wow. Just, wow.
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
I love the underlying
I love the underlying messages in this. You disguised them perfectly within the story. I love the ending. Great job.