~*~Hey everyone, this isn't the greatest poem ever, but I do like the idea. Anyone have any ideas of how I can make it better?~*~
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What was that tapping sound?
Was it leaves against the window
Or water quenching the ground?
Or was it something worse?
My mind envisions spooks and sprites
A pale horse with reddened eyes
The goblin king in all his might
Back the curtains swish
The window is laid black and bare
A portal to my well-lit study
But to my relief, nothing is there
Or is there something?
A golden shimmer in the rain
A sparkle of fairy dust
And the tapping comes again
I see it now, stronger
And I see pictures in its depths
I open the window glass
And all the screts it has kept
Come pouring in
It is a story, and epic tale
The pictures roll out of the dust
And become heroes, hearty and hale
Golden in the candlelight
They begin to act their saga out
I dash for paper and my pen
My neck is sore as I turn about
Gawking at the characters
Who have invaded my room
Daylight comes, and they fade
All too soon
But I have written reams this night
As attested by my paper-cut and ink-stained hand
What a wonderful yarn I've witnessed!
Of maidens, knights, and shifting sand
My eyelids droop, my bed is calling
And I let sleep happen
For I want to be fresh and ready, if
Tomorrow night, a story comes a-tappin'.
Comments
Excellent!
I love love love it! The idea is wonderful and it's well-written too. Don't change a thing!
Katie:-)
"Are all humans like this? So much bigger on the inside?"
-Idris/TARDIS
Love it!
I wouldn't change anything-it's great the way it is! It's full of great metaphors, I love all the imagination in it. Wonderful job!
I loved this, Heather. It
I loved this, Heather. It gave me shivers! I can't think of anything to improve it, especially since I am no poet. Oh, and congratulations on being a married lady, by the way!
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
Very good
I honestly can't see anything to improve in it. It's an excallent poem. full of great imagery.
Formerly Kestrel