Campfire

Submitted by Heather on Mon, 01/23/2012 - 18:49

Curl

    Wisping

        Twist

Smoke rising from a campfire

Lick

    Devour

          Ash

Fire rising from a branch

Wave

    Rustle

        Whirl

Branch rising from the wind

Push

    Moving

        Float

Wind rising from a fire

Smoke

    Ash

        Twisting

            Float

                Repeat

Campfire

Author's age when written
22
Genre
Poetry

Comments

Bernadette

Wed, 01/25/2012 - 23:45

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I love the set up of the poem....how you ended with one word and then picked up that word again....smash of brilliancy.