REMOVED - The Falling Out

Submitted by Heather Jones on Tue, 11/13/2018 - 18:40

Publishing a poetry book and chose this poem to be in it! Wish me luck, friends! :")

Author's age when written
17
Genre
Notes

Auuugh, I've been working on this for days, but for some reason I can't come up with a decent ending. Ah, well. I tried.

Comments

Haha I'm glad you liked the ending. xD

“planting seeds inevitably changes my feelings about rain.” —luci shaw.
psalm 84:10 esv.

Oh my goodness, Heather. This really touched me deeply. I loved every line equally and I can't tell you how gorgeous your imagery is because there are so many words to say but none of them work to mean what I want because it's all so BEAUTIFUL!!!! There. There's a word. I found one!
Goodness me, Heather, I'm so happy you're on Apricot Pie and can share these things. Thank you for your work!

Introverts unite!
Separately!
From the comfort of your own homes!

Madalyn you are too kind!!! This comment has absolutely made my day oh my word ;v; you have no idea how much that means to me! Thank you so much! I absolutely love your work by the way as well <3 it's all so good!!

“planting seeds inevitably changes my feelings about rain.” —luci shaw.
psalm 84:10 esv.