Her Name

Submitted by Hannah W. on Tue, 04/10/2012 - 23:25

Steady, her name
balanced its sword or spear or pole
to fight, or to throw, or to catch a fish
gleaming in the sun?
No one knows.

Strong stood the feet of her name;
her letters spilled and pooled and stayed
firm in serifs and type,
and curled at the edges like old paper chains
gilded golden with light.

Her name, teasing loops
of a soft-spun web or a knotted rope
cast to the water, wide-flung her net--
what sought she to catch within
those loosely woven threads?

Steady, her name
balanced its sword or spear or pole
to fight, or to throw, or to catch a fish?
Gleaming in the sun,
she knows.

Author's age when written
17
Genre

Comments

that is what I say!!!

"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson

That was really awesome.... I could see what you were describing in my head... so beautiful... I am trying to learn from your poetry how to improve mine!!!! Thank you! Master Hannah!

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

I'm with Tamerah, as well.

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief