Steady, her name
balanced its sword or spear or pole
to fight, or to throw, or to catch a fish
gleaming in the sun?
No one knows.
Strong stood the feet of her name;
her letters spilled and pooled and stayed
firm in serifs and type,
and curled at the edges like old paper chains
gilded golden with light.
Her name, teasing loops
of a soft-spun web or a knotted rope
cast to the water, wide-flung her net--
what sought she to catch within
those loosely woven threads?
Steady, her name
balanced its sword or spear or pole
to fight, or to throw, or to catch a fish?
Gleaming in the sun,
she knows.
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^^^^^^^^^^
that is what I say!!!
"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson
whoa...
That was really awesome.... I could see what you were describing in my head... so beautiful... I am trying to learn from your poetry how to improve mine!!!! Thank you! Master Hannah!
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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine
Beautiful, as always.
Beautiful, as always. The second stanza is definitely my favourite.
so cool.
This is awesome Hannah....it's so cool.
What they said.
I'm with Tamerah, as well.
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
I could read your stuff all
I could read your stuff all day.
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond