A Narnian Coronation

Submitted by Elizabeth on Sat, 11/10/2007 - 21:34

The trumpets blare!
The heralds sing!
The banners flared!
The eagle’s wing!

Hail King Peter!
Hail Queen Susan!
Hail King Edmund!
Hail Queen Lucy!

The Magnificent!
The Gentle!
The Just!
The Brave!

From Spare Oom they came
From a journey of peril
From battle fame
They come now to Cair Paravel!

May the reign!
May they rule!
May they prosper!
May they have fame!

Hail the kings and queens!

Author's age when written
13
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Comments

Even more Narnia fans! *sniff* I'm so happy. I've found my people!

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

Well, I kind of knew that, cuz I've been posting on it.. or were you not talkign to me? oops

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

I like Narnia too! And.......
LOTR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Elizabeth,

I love this poem!! You did such a good job!!!

(I thought I had commented on this before, but when I looked at it again, I realized I hadn't! :P My mistake.)

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

I like it a lot. I have read your first Forth Three Hunters poem as well, and can see that you have talent. I love Narnia and LOTR, so these poems are right down my alley.
Laura

Oh it's lovely deary. Short and simple, but very.......yeah. I think it's very, what's the word?....powerful maybe?...No, that's not the word but it's something like that. I like it.

"A wizard is never late, nor is he early; he arrives presicely when he means to." Gandalf