Autumn

Submitted by Clare Marie on Wed, 02/27/2008 - 20:28

The pretty leaves come floating down
Upon the chilly breeze,
Reminding me of butterflies
Dancing with the bees.

The trees are all a red, orange and gold;
Nature's firework display.
Splashes of color shine brilliantly
Around me as I play.

But all too soon the snow comes down;
The trees all lose their sheen.
At least in my mind I have secure
A gorgeous Autumn scene.

Author's age when written
10
Genre
Poetry
Tags
beauty of Autumn

Comments

Anonymous

Thu, 02/28/2008 - 03:12

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I love the pretty little picture it paints in my mind! Job well done! :)
~eMiLy~

Clare Marie

Thu, 02/28/2008 - 15:14

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Thanks!!!

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

Elizabeth

Thu, 02/28/2008 - 17:07

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Dear Clare,

Wonderful writing! Beautiful! I love it!

Elizabeth

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

Ezra

Fri, 02/29/2008 - 02:33

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I'll be waiting for winter, spring, and summer.

"There are no great men of God. There are only pitiful, sorry men whose God is great beyond measure." - Paul Washer [originally Jonathan Edwards]

Brianna

Fri, 02/29/2008 - 18:02

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Very nice, Clare.

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"We have been created for greater things. Why stoop down to things that will spoil the beauty of our hearts?" ~Mother Theresa

Clare Marie

Tue, 03/04/2008 - 17:23

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Whoops! I think I posted the above as a comment, not a reply. Thanks!!!

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

Clare Marie

Tue, 03/04/2008 - 17:27

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I realized that I posted my apology twice, so now I have to edit this one so there aren't two of them. I am so bad with computers!!!

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

Angela

Thu, 07/17/2008 - 22:53

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I LOVE IT CLARE!!!!! It was great! You are a Really good wrighter.

OH YO YO
☺~Ang☺

Clare Marie

Fri, 07/18/2008 - 01:05

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Thanks Angela!!
Welcome to Apricotpie!! I think you'll like it here. :)

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]