submission

Submitted by Brianna on Tue, 04/15/2008 - 22:47

At the end now
falling down now
giving up now
all for you

Changed and broken
left and shaken
now awakened
to your love

Peace has washed me
clean of worry
all of me
is all for you, and
one day coming
I'll come running
home

Author's age when written
14
Genre
Poetry
Tags
New
at the end
submitting
repenting
changed
peaceful

Comments

Timothy

Thu, 04/17/2008 - 22:21

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I like the hurried feel, which you have gotten quite good at. :)

Aisling

Mon, 04/21/2008 - 21:51

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It's beautiful, Brianna. The flow is stunning and flawless. Good work.

Brianna

Tue, 04/22/2008 - 20:18

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Thanks guys. =)

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"We have been created for greater things. Why stoop down to things that will spoil the beauty of our hearts?" ~Mother Theresa

Elizabeth

Fri, 04/25/2008 - 19:44

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Beutifully written!

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

Velocity

Fri, 05/16/2008 - 16:13

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Nice poem :)

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The Truth will set you free.