It's a cold misty morning,
The sun is just rising,
She walks through the grass,
She walks in the dawn,
She stops by a rose bush,
She plucks a red rose,
As she smells,
The flowers sweetness,
Tears come to her eyes.
Looking at the rising sun,
She begins to cry.
Thinking of the bitter life she's led,
Thinking of her troubles,
Another sigh is heaved,
Another tear is shed.
A hand is laid upon her shoulder,
A comforting word said,
Her love has returned to her,
Her world has come to life again.
No more tears fall,
No more sighs heaved.
Her love has come back to her,
In the misty dawn
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Thank you. Actually I was
Thank you. Actually I was thinking about that when I wrote this. Great movie.
"Borrowed, borrowed without permission. But with every intension of returning?" Jack Sparrow
It awoke with a shrill shreak that can be trnaslated "How dare you leave me in this bed, when I am asleep and helpless?" My sister
loverly:)
Very good, dear! I was seeing Pride and Prudjudice too, but with a couple different tweeks of my own imagination:)
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"Yes, words are useless! Gobble-gobble-gobble-gobble-gobble! Too much of it, darling, too much! That is why I show you my work! That is why you are here!" --Edna Mode (the Incredibles)
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"To produce a mighty book, you must choose a mighty theme. No great and enduring volume can ever be written on the flea, though many there be that have tried it." -- Herman Melville
Bravo
Wow, you surprised me with this one. And you said you weren't a poem person. Good job, child. Good job.
"...And I'm Lukas, his evil spawn." my brother introducing himself, after my dad.
Your not good at
Your not good at poems...ha!
Brit your quote made me laugh SO hard...maybe it's because I know the evil person :) HAHAHAHAHA
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"Yes, words are useless! Gobble-gobble-gobble-gobble-gobble! Too much of it, darling, too much! That is why I show you my work! That is why you are here!" --Edna Mode (the Incredibles)
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"To produce a mighty book, you must choose a mighty theme. No great and enduring volume can ever be written on the flea, though many there be that have tried it." -- Herman Melville
Occasionally I am able to
Occasionally I am able to concoct something good, and call it a poem.
Yes, ha ha. Lovely quote. Makes me laugh.
"Borrowed, borrowed without permission. But with every intension of returning?" Jack Sparrow
It awoke with a shrill shreak that can be trnaslated "How dare you leave me in this bed, when I am asleep and helpless?" My sister
Your concoction turned out
Your concoction turned out very nicely. I was also picturing Pride and Pejudice. Very nice indeed.
"Here are the beauties which pierce like swords or burn like cold iron." C.S.Lewis
"It is foolish and wrong to mourn the men who died. Rather we should thank God such men lived."
General George S. Patton
Thank you, and I am
Thank you, and I am regretting saying that. So if would, block that out, I never said it.
Thanks for reading it.
"Borrowed, borrowed without permission. But with every intension of returning?" Jack Sparrow
It awoke with a shrill shreak that can be trnaslated "How dare you leave me in this bed, when I am asleep and helpless?" My sister
Wow, Alecia, this is
Wow, Alecia, this is beautiful. And you say you aren't a poet???
It reminds me of P&P too. [Sorry if you're tired of people saying that, but I had to point it out. :D]
Job well done. :)
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Thank you. You know, I never
Thank you. You know, I never saw that you commented. P&P, that's fine. I really don't mind. It's what was being pictured when I wrote it, so it makes me feel like I accomplished what I set out to.
"Welcome to the land of little orange fruit." The Brit-some comment somewhere, welcoming someone.
It awoke with a shrill shreak that can be trnaslated "How dare you leave me in this bed, when I am asleep and helpless?" My sister
It reminds me of Pride and
It reminds me of Pride and Prejudice. The new one with Kiera Knightly. It's really pretty, and I like the way you wrote it.
"Courage is being scared to death and saddling up anyway." - John Wayne
"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya