Wind Whispers

Submitted by Aalen Fideli on Sun, 09/23/2012 - 01:13

I'm lost in a valley full of flowers and sun
I want to be out there and I only have to run

Mountains behind clouds enjoying the day
I'm too close to me but I'll never get away

Lost, but I like it and I'm staying where I am
As soon as I find myself I'll run away again

Can't stay here and I can't go home
I nearly died from loving being alone

Author's age when written
16
Genre
Poetry

Comments

Madeline

Sun, 09/23/2012 - 22:13

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There are some powerful phrases in this poem. I really liked it. :) The rhythm was a bit off, but that's fine. Your poetry is really, really good!

Lucy Anne

Thu, 10/04/2012 - 17:27

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Love the valley full of flowers and sun and mountains and clouds--you painted a picture in my mind with only few words!

"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson

Maddi

Fri, 10/05/2012 - 01:52

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I'm same as Homey; some very strong phrases. Good.

P.S. I clicked on your My Music link; and I love it! Absolutely love it! You didn't make them yourself, did you? :)

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

Maddi

Sat, 10/06/2012 - 05:23

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No way...

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh