All wise men fear water.
They fear drowning, in too deep
they fear rain dripping steadily onto the street
they always carry umbrellas and
they never look at seas.
When I was young, I saw a river
Due to drought, it was growing thinner.
Stones were like gems inside it and
the fish were just like silver.
The water was streaming onward fast
not a hard-smooth mirror or a sheet of glass.
I reached my hand into it and
I felt it rushing past.
I fell headfirst, dragged down deep
the river swept me off my feet.
I was pulled on by the current and
carried to the sea.
All wise men fear water, but
they can't swim like me.
Comments
Extremely amazing. Your
Extremely amazing. Your poetry blows my mind!
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
Awesome!
This is really good....I love it, awesome....
Fantastic
This is so good! The descriptions are lovely and wonderful! :)
"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson
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I really, really like the topic of this poem!!!!!!! Loved the end; loved the whole thing!
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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine
I echo the thoughts of all
I echo the thoughts of all those before me... love it! Especially the end.
The unexpected end made me
The unexpected end made me happy.
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
How great! I really like the
How great! I really like the stanza
The water was streaming onward fast
not a hard-smooth mirror or a sheet of glass.
I reached my hand into it and
I felt it rushing past.
"Sometimes even to live is courage."
-Seneca