Whispers

Submitted by Flying Past Clouds on Sat, 05/24/2014 - 17:26

The whole world reminds me of you

The sky's blue
And I've still heard nothing

The flowers are beautiful
I wish you were here to see them

My love, are you listening?
My love, are you alright?
My love, won't you stay here?
Won't you let me set things right?

There's nothing else to say
But I'm sorry
And please forgive me

Author's age when written
15
Genre

Comments

I like this a lot. Strong image and very specific feeling. Great job!

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond