Then There Was One

Submitted by Flying Past Clouds on Fri, 12/27/2013 - 06:38

I never gave you the hero's goodbye you deserved
As I fled into the night, I realized
I didn't want to see your gold fade away
And I threw my hat to the forest vowing:

I will never love again.

Author's age when written
14
Genre
Poetry
Notes

Short, post-Christmas poetry.

Comments

Kassady

Tue, 12/31/2013 - 14:36

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Felt so fantastical! Is it suppose to be fantasy? Or is it suppose to have that feeling but it's realistic? Whatever it is I absolutely adore the imagery and wording!
"I didn't want to see your gold fade away" love that! And the last line! You definitely made 5 words powerful!!!!

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

E

Tue, 12/31/2013 - 15:36

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This is super cool. :)

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond