Your birthday's in October
You only speak the truth
You're funny and you're sweet
And I really do love you
Your eyes are bright and sparkly
You're a shopping partner too
You make me laugh so easily
Have I said that I love you?
Whenever you are scared
Just know I'm next to you
And we'll be scared together
(I'll probably whisper 'I love you')
You make the best pancakes
You love the colour blue
You're a wonderful best buddy
Have you guessed that I love you?
So beautifully random
I hope you never get the flu
And if you do, you should rest
And remember, I love you
So come on, what are you waiting for?
We have great things to do!
Your caring heart will serve you well,
Don't forget that I love you
A lovely little change from my normally so morbid, dark, and or love-lorn poetry. I kept revising and revising to make this MORE beautiful! Heh heh. But really, this is a cute little poem for someone very dear to me, and, albeit a little repetitive, I tried really hard to make this as meaningful as possible.
Comments
I'm with Kass on this one!
I'm with Kass on this one! The little details were perfect. :) This was like the most adorable little present all wrapped up in a frilly bow. I loved it.
Favorite line: You make the best pancakes
:D
I just wanted to thank you both for such lovely comments! :D I really appreciate it.
Aw, so cute!!!!!
Aw, so cute!!!!!
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
Wonderfully sweet!
I love this! It's so sweet and rhymes perfectly. The wording is fab, and I love the message! SO SWEET! It's REALLY well written, seriously.
LOVE IT!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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