I've run from almost
Everything
From dawn to dusk
I dare not sing
I know life will
Catch up to me
I've kept my secrets
Told my lies
Try to aviod
Last goodbyes
I try too hard
To stop the pain
But I always find myself
Crying in the rain
There's not enough time
For the stars in the sky
Or minutes in a day
Or enough time to cry
But nothing will stop me
Not even death
I'll keep on running
Past my final breath
Comments
That's a great hand you've
That's a great hand you've got there! I like the rhythm of it; except the last line doesn't tie it up very well. Love it. :)
Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh
Sun, 10/21/2012 - 21:01
In reply to That's a great hand you've by Maddi
You know, it really doesn't
You know, it really doesn't tie in! I'll probably go and edit that now that I realise it. Thanks!
Good poem! Write more. :)
Good poem! Write more. :)
"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson
Sun, 10/21/2012 - 22:48
In reply to Good poem! Write more. :) by Lucy Anne
Thank you!!! :D
Thank you!!! :D
Well, I fixed the ending, and
Well, I fixed the ending, and I like it sooooo much more than the last one! Hope you guys do too!
Love it!
I really like this!! I know I commented before, but before you had fixed the ending. BRILLIANT!
Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh
Well, I've tried my hand at
Well, I've tried my hand at poetry! I think it went rather well, don't you? Not much to comment about this right now...if there's any other random thoughts of mine on this I'll be sure to post it!