I Will Never Dance

Submitted by Ezra on Sun, 08/17/2008 - 23:23

The floor is marble, polished gleaming black
And in it move the shadows of a hundred sparkling gowns
Accompanied by suits of courtly trim.

And I, I stand aside, twixt marble colonnade
To watch: the ever moving, perfect stepping flow
And flawless, smiling faces beneath the chandeliers

Of those who dance to melancholy music:
A tune of faded roses and anguished, fever dew*
Which swirls about the lofty, dreamy room

Intoxicating, wreathed about the twirling shadows
Who dance, change hands, and dance again
And waltz until the candles flicker low.

While I’m already in my dreams – asleep,
The candle light goes out, and darkness quickly falls
Across the dancing hall, and music fades

And broken pairs drift silently apart
With red-rimmed eyes; they sigh, and say once more,
“I will never, never dance again.”

Author's age when written
20
Genre
Notes

*This line is drawn from “La Belle Dame Sans Merci”, a poem by John Keats (English Romantic Era, 1795 – 1821).

Comments

I really like this piece, Ezra...it appeals to the melancholy in me. It seems like there's a meaning to it, hidden deep where I'd have to dig like crazy to get it out (like George MacDonald's stuff). Well done! You should pursue publishing with some of your stuff.

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And now our hearts will beat in time/You say I am yours and you are mine...
Michelle Tumes, "There Goes My Love"

Heather, the poem's meaning is (I hope) a little closer to the surface than you might think. The reference to "La Belle Dame Sans Merci" is meant to be a sort of key in that respect.

Anyway, thanks for the comments, everyone.

"There are no great men of God. There are only pitiful, sorry men whose God is great beyond measure." - Paul Washer [originally Jonathan Edwards]

Lovely and a bit sad too. I love it, Ezra!

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

That was a cool poem! I love it.

Falling Leaves-unschooler, horse lover, and obsesser over writing, reading and proper grammar.

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond