Unique

Submitted by Emilee on Thu, 08/09/2012 - 06:17

I have a question, does anyone know why my picture won't show up? I have tried a couple different ones and they all do this!(or can you guys see it and just I can't?) If anyone has any clue, I would really appreciate it! Also, any advice with the poetry would be very appreciated, and a comment would make my day!
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Unique

I am scared
Senseless
Shaking

To be me
Original
Unique

To open up
Show
Tell

To be free
Giggle
Wink

You could hate
Disdain
Judge

You could love
Smile
Hug

We could match
Attract
Talk

We could clash
Confuse
Annoy

I must hide
Walls
Fake

I must leave
Hide
Run

I want acceptance
Understanding
Love

To be me
Original
Unique

If you hate
Disdain
Judge

That is you
Original
Unique

I’ll be fine
Strong
Brave

Because I ‘m me
Original
Unique

Author's age when written
17
Genre
Poetry
Tags
life
acceptance
fear
individuality

Comments

Arthur

Fri, 08/10/2012 - 04:42

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I do not know what the problem is that will not let you see your picture, but I notify James about it.
As for your poetry, I really can't give you advice, not being a poet myself. It does sound good though.

"My greatest wish for my writing is that it would point you to the Savior."

Madeline

Fri, 08/10/2012 - 12:20

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Good job again! This flowed nicely. :-)

As for the picture, I've been having the same problem! Ahh! Poor James--it probably never ends. LOL! When I try to upload a picture it won't show up, so...I don't know! :)

Lucy Anne

Fri, 08/10/2012 - 14:37

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I really like this poem. It stands out for me because it relates to me. I'm not a shy person, but when it comes to telling other people about my personal affairs when I have to, it can be hard. For example. Tomorrow I'm getting baptized as a believer in Christ and so I will have to give my testimony. That can be hard. And every word in this poem just seems to be for me. I can just relate to it so much!

A really good poem! :)

p.s. about the picture problem, yes, I have trouble too. Poor James!

"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson