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Rhyming Lines

My mind is filled
With rhyming lines
The rhythm beats
Always just off time

The pen dances
Across paper white
The word’s cliché
The sentence’s trite

I cannot keep back
These jumbled words
My heart would die
So they soar like birds

My emotions show
I don’t go into hiding
When I have a pen
It’s how I do my crying

You see words
On a page that’s white
With rhyming lines
The sentence’s so trite

But you judge me
Not those soiled pages
Because that’s me
When not kept in cages