Dream

Submitted by Emilee on Tue, 10/23/2012 - 18:33

"A dream is a wish your heart makes" I love comments :)
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Dream

A hand upon mine
Gently pulls me
I stand

An arm encirles me
Brushes my gown
I look

A kind young man
Soft green eyes
Dark hair

A smile that adores
I realize, me
Can’t think

A happy fog surrounds
My empty mind
We sway

A soft, romantic waltz
My gown sparkles
I smile

A moment consumes me
I can’t question
Just love

An hour becomes two
We whisper vows
To stay

A quite voice beckons
Calls my name
I awake

I gasp and recoil
A familiar face
I slept

Author's age when written
17
Genre
Poetry
Tags
love
fairy tale

Comments

Maddi

Wed, 10/24/2012 - 08:48

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This is so good! Wow, the way you portrayed everything is just superb. Every time you write, it gets better and better! Love the last 3 lines. :D

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

Lucy Anne

Wed, 10/24/2012 - 22:53

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Cute. I like the ending -- lately your endings are always beginning to surprise me and are always putting a twist to the whole poem; so cool!

"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson