This is a poem I wrote sort of about my story, Thieves, hence the title. :) Unfortunately, I have not been able to finish any more of the story recently, so that will have to wait until my next post (hopefully).
Open the skies,
Pour down the rain,
Burn up the sun
With the power of their pain.
Can they be heard,
Above the cries?
Can they be seen,
Above the skies?
The city cries,
Burning with hunger,
Filled with disgust
For the cause of their hunger.
Can they be heard,
Above the cries?
Can they be seen,
Floating through the skies?
Thieves
On the wings of dragons
So high
In the sky
Flying by
Going to try
And do right.
Comments
Thanks! I'm glad you like
Thanks! I'm glad you like this so much.
See him with his books:
Tree beside the brooks,
Drinking at the root
Till the branch bear fruit.
See him with his pen:
Written line, and then,
Better thought preferred,
Deep from in the Word.
~John Piper
The rhythm is so good.
The rhythm is so good.
"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson
Oh, this is cool. I'd love it
Oh, this is cool. I'd love it to play on a soundtrack while I read the story!
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
Thanks! Maybe I'll try to
Thanks!
Maybe I'll try to turn it into a song for you.
See him with his books:
Tree beside the brooks,
Drinking at the root
Till the branch bear fruit.
See him with his pen:
Written line, and then,
Better thought preferred,
Deep from in the Word.
~John Piper
I love, love LOVE this!! No,
I love, love LOVE this!! No, I've FALLEN in-love with this! How on earth do you to the rhythm like that...
Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh