A mirror,
A glass,
A reflection
Of gold.
A river,
A stream,
A strength
Not our own.
God is our guide,
Our perfection,
Our strength
Pure and true.
Like a curtain
Pulled between
Is our sin
Of today.
Like a magnified heart
Is our spirit
Of decay
And depravity.
Yet a hope has
Sprung
From the sky
As we look around
And wonder why
We don't sink
In our sea of despair
And death.
God is creator,
Sustainer,
Divine.
He is ruler of all-
Both the rich
And the blind.
All of us sin,
And fall,
And die.
But God's word is the truth
And it speaks of new life
In Christ.
We bear His image,
And should lead
Towards his glory.
Yet our ultimate failure
Is not fulfilling the purpose.
Through Christ
We have a chance
To erase out mistake,
Find our joy in Him,
And throw off our disgrace.
We,
Unjust,
Have now been
Justified.
We,
Unright,
Are bent and
Disfigured.
We must be fixed.
He can fix us.
We don't deserve to be fixed.
Incredible!
We are made
Righteous,
As if we were
Righteous.
Incredible!
I will what
I don't,
And I don't
What I do.
Despite my sin,
Death is no more.
I am obligated
To plunge into the depths
Of His glory.
I know I promised an essay, but I kept adding and adding to it until it was WAY too long. So... I turned the basic ideas into a poem instead. I hope you like... :)
Comments
:)
I do like this.
Through Christ
We have a chance
To erase out mistake,
Find our joy in Him,
And throw off our disgrace.
We,
Unjust,
Have now been
Justified.
Look, I want to highlight this entire poem...but obviously I won't. Iit was so simple but good! Wonderful job! :) -- Megan
"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson
Thank you! I have to give
Thank you!
I have to give partial credit to my dad as well. He did a really good sermon with almost the exact things I was writing about, so I kind of organized the progression of this poem similar to his sermon.
See him with his books:
Tree beside the brooks,
Drinking at the root
Till the branch bear fruit.
See him with his pen:
Written line, and then,
Better thought preferred,
Deep from in the Word.
~John Piper
:)
Well done! :)
Great!
I really liked the theological content in this poem. I am also interested in the essay too, even if it is really long. :)
"My greatest wish for my writing is that it would point you to the Savior."
thanks, Arthur! Maybe I will
thanks, Arthur! Maybe I will finish the essay then.
See him with his books:
Tree beside the brooks,
Drinking at the root
Till the branch bear fruit.
See him with his pen:
Written line, and then,
Better thought preferred,
Deep from in the Word.
~John Piper
Wed, 03/27/2013 - 17:41
In reply to thanks, Arthur! Maybe I will by Elizabeth Anne
Yes, please do!
Yes, please do!
"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson
I have no idea why my comment
I have no idea why my comment was published before I said SAVE! ...
"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson