Removed for magazine entry... I’m keeping my fingers crossed!!
-Damaris Ann
...you kill writer's block by trying something new. Bear with me. :P Sometimes our hearts are more creative than our brains. Here's to hoping that someday I'll finish my thing. (Thing is at a word count of 13,141 and the goal is 90,000...so we'll see.) *end of crazy ramble*
Comments
Awwwwww
Thank you so much!!! I'm so so glad you liked it. I may try some more similar poems soon. :) thanks again for your lovely comment!!
I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.
Best of luck to you, Damaris!
Best of luck to you, Damaris!
Introverts unite!
Separately!
From the comfort of your own homes!
Wed, 02/13/2019 - 00:27
In reply to Best of luck to you, Damaris! by Madalyn Clare
Thanks! Unfortunately it was
Thanks! Unfortunately it was rejected.
I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.
YOUR BEST SO FAR!!!
YOUR BEST SO FAR!!!
Maybe it's just my loopy 4:30 am self (was up all night editing haha) but I was totally on top of that ferris wheel with you, reaching for words out of reach. Oh, my, I loved this. EXCELLENT instinctive feel for words in this --
"With which to hypnotize
Synchronize"
And the cerebral smack made me laugh. Again, I'm loopy right now, but I think even my daytime mind would'e giggled. Great poem.