Tic tac
Jaw slack
Got that cherry red lip smack
Back packin' out back
Old hick
With this chick
I'll park for you to see the view
And no, girl, I ain't eyein' you
Sun's low
Home slow
Keep a fellow on his toes
Hit the trail to keep it close
Corvette
You bet
It's time to detour; take a ride
I'm proud to have you by my side
Sweet tea
You and me
Your smile is a sight to see
Pink cheeks no cheat
Well hey
Okay
I guess you really have to say
This has been a southern day
I wrote this for fun. It kinda has a Trace Adkins feel to it, and I can even hear him singing it in my head, tune and all. Anyways, hope y'all enjoyed it. I wanted to post a Christmas poem but it (sadly) is not finished, and everything else I have on hand is far too personal to share on here. :)
Comments
Aww thank you so much!!!
Aww thank you so much!!! You're so sweet.
Ooh, yes. I'll fix that right now. :) thanks for pointing that out!
I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.
OKAY I CAN'T WRITE A POEM
OKAY I CAN'T WRITE A POEM LIKE THIS ONE!!!!!!!!! HOW DO YOU DO IT?! I LOVE THIS BOUNCE IN THE RHYTHM!!!!!
With that overwith, somebody make this into a song! It's so cute and I love your rhyme scheme!
Introverts unite!
Separately!
From the comfort of your own homes!
Thu, 12/29/2016 - 20:09
In reply to OKAY I CAN'T WRITE A POEM by Madalyn Clare
I DON'T EVEN KNOW!!! XD But
I DON'T EVEN KNOW!!!
XD But thank you. :) Keep writing!! Your own poetry is sooooooo charming! And you're so sweet. Thank you again. :)
I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.
This is so much fun, I really
This is so much fun, I really enjoyed the best of it! Well done!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
Aww thank you, Kass! I
Aww thank you, Kass! I appreciate it.
I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.
The rhythm and wording of
The rhythm and wording of this is adorable. I love it. : )
Aww thank you!
Aww thank you!
I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.
Ahhh I love this so much! I
Ahhh I love this so much! I can almost hear it with a bluegrassish guitar, and maybe a fiddle.
"Knowledge is knowing that a tomato is a fruit; wisdom is not putting it in a fruit salad." ~ Anonymous
This is SO CUTE. There's a
This is SO CUTE. There's a sassiness to it that I love. It screams "country", and your style and flair you've put in it are fantastic. Only one critique: And no girl I ain't eyein' you
That line was a little unclear to me, because I think it needs punctuation. At first I thought you were saying "no girl" as in "there's no girl" but then when you followed it with the last half I understood, but it's a little unclear.
And no, girl, I ain't eyein' you
I think that will really clear it up! You did a fantastic job; this is adorable! Merry, merry Christmas to you!