WOW.... the visuals are strong with this one! Very thought provoking and crisp and clean but at the same time rainy and sad. When I read poetry I tend to envision random/very clear things. When I read this I immediately heard it echoing through a dark, sad, rainy night, with neon lights that just aren't bright enough to respark your soul, only enough light to see that one is alone.

Very good job! Lol don't you love poetry at 2 am? :P