Alright, so this is some old stuff I posted, but for some reason, I deleted it. Don't ask me why; I think that was back when I thought it was ridiculous. Anyway, I'm posting it again, and here it is.
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Exhilaration Running headlong
Into disaster
The wind tangles my hair
Muscles clenching
Feet pounding
There they are
Here I am
Kill me if you can
Living in disaster
I've never been happier
Back In Remember Remember.
I don't want to go there;
Too much pain to bear.
Remember.
Where have I been
In the realm of Back Then?
Remember.
I danced the Dance of Pain.
I'll never be the same.
Remember?
You tried so hard to say
That there would be another day.
The way I slapped your face and screamed
And in my dreams I dreamed
That you meant it.
But you didn't.
Remember?
Somehow I'm back in Remember.
Of Forever I feel I will die.
This land, where am I?
In the depths of the heart
Of forever I want someone to care.
But nobody's there
In the caverns of dark
Of forever. How do I start
To look for my heart?
It's lost in the world
Of forever.
Genre
Hmm....
I really like the feelings of these (if you understand my meaning).
My personal favorite was Back in Remember but that might be because it rym's :/ ... Sorry i'm not much help when it comes to unryming poems, lol. But I think they all are good! Why ever did you through them away!
Good job!
Write on!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!