White Dawn

Submitted by Bernadette on Thu, 03/04/2010 - 17:30

 

The hawk took wing

And stretched out his flight

Soaring above the earth

As the sun was raised

Breaking the coldness.  

 

Shivers ran through the ground

And a silent tremor

Rustled through the trees.

 

The sky shone vast

Like a golden sea

The hills were gleaming

As the snow faded

All the earth below him

All the sky above him.

 

The glory of the seas

Rippled and glinted

The sky spread blue

As the white dawn

Flashed its wing about it.

Author's age when written
12
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Comments

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.

 

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"So hey hey, this song is for us
So put your hands in the air if you’re crazy like us
Hey hey
Hey hey, that’s freedom you hear
Comin’ right to your ear, that’s the sound from our bus
Hey hey!

Why try to be like someone else
When you can only be yourself?
No one can sing the song you do
Be true, be legendary you
So I won’t sell out, even if the whole world thinks I’m crazy!"- "Hey Hey" by Superchick from Rock what You got (2008)

Really lovely! Beautiful imagery!

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

Beautiful!  Simply beautiful.

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]