The Tide

Submitted by Bernadette on Thu, 09/27/2007 - 18:34

The Tide comes upon
The shore sweeping
Away the rocks and shells

The sun rises
Over the hills

The tide goes away
Leaving new shells
To be gathered

Author's age when written
10
Genre
Poetry
Tags
Ocean
shore

Comments

Anonymous

Fri, 09/28/2007 - 18:26

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Beautifully written! I love the ocean!

Emily-Smileygirl (not verified)

Sun, 12/16/2007 - 01:21

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beautifully written! You are going to be an amazing writer.
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